[原创] Barney and Tiff's Amazing Adventures #3

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Jun
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[原创] Barney and Tiff's Amazing Adventures #3

Post by Jun » 2006-01-25 7:22

The Accidental Artist


“Oh, my God! Burglar!” was my first thought at the sight of Barney’s living room. The door was slightly ajar, so I left myself in
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Post by 笑嘻嘻 » 2006-01-25 15:51

咦,我刚刚听见有人说写不完睡不着的,
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Post by tiffany » 2006-01-25 15:52

jun was talking about stop at mid-sentence.
:mrgreen:
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Post by Jun » 2006-01-25 15:53

笑大你又来陷害我! :speechless001:

还是白金救我. 没白借你老的大名啊... :love011:

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Post by 花差花差小将军 » 2006-01-25 15:55

破句 :mrgreen:
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Post by helenClaire » 2006-01-26 12:53

Jun,这篇好玩儿。 :mrgreen: 是不是脱胎于你以前关于艺术与魔鬼(?)的讨论帖子,艺术才华的基因有什么进化上的意义和作用? :wink:
题目里的#3是什么含义?#1,#2呢? :-P
四人约会那段里的巴尼干净老练会和人打交道,估计到哪儿都受欢迎。即不同于邋遢的NERD巴尼,也不同于后来邋遢的艺术家巴尼。大概基因治疗早期的转型阶段,效果最理想。 :yinyang:

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Post by Jun » 2006-01-26 13:02

Barney and Tiff's adventures是我老早以前开始写的一个系列, 不过所谓系列, 其实只写过#0, #1, #2, 这是#3. 上一个是02年七月写的, 比这更搞笑一点. 头两个太古老了, 我自己都找不到了, 反正写得满烂的, 丢了也不可惜.

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Post by Jun » 2006-01-27 9:33

以创记录的速度草草完成. 欢迎批评指教.

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Post by tiffany » 2006-01-27 13:54

呵呵,这篇写的好玩儿。
Barney明显是bi-polar症状哦。
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Post by tiffany » 2006-01-27 14:22

然后指手画脚一下儿。故事开头儿节奏有点儿慢,中段以后节奏加快,更加吸引人了。
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