[读书报告] On Chesil Beach

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[读书报告] On Chesil Beach

Post by Jun » 2008-12-29 23:14

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What a mess of a book! I was perpetually swung violently between 70% deep irritation and 30% sharp delight. In the end, however, I decided that the 30% delight, the 30% truth, the 30% cleverness, was not enough to change my negative opinion of the novel (more like a novella). The good parts are pieces of pebbles, like the shingles on the Chesil Beach as McEwan described, too randomly scattered among the 70% silliness and artificiality.

I suspect, and the suspicion grew stronger as I approached the end, that the book is deep down misogynistic, although McEwan was ever so careful in disguising this sentiment with a plot device, which he correctly chose to only hint at but not fully reveal because doing so would have expose the fact that it is a device, a gimmick, and a pretty cheap one too, to cover up his resentment and coldness toward the female character.

Oh yeah, the story. A young couple, both 22, both virgins, got married in 1962, on the eve of the sexual and social revolution that was to sweep away all the barriers that, at this moment, irreversibly separate them on their wedding night. The groom, Edward, was from a country family of the lower class with a healthy sexual appetite and physical attraction to his new wife. The bride, Florence, came out of an upper class Oxford family and was a classically trained musician; she was terrified and disgusted of sex. And so they had a pathetic and disastrous wedding night. And they fought.

The structure is intricate. Too intricate. Too deliberate. Every anecdote serves a purpose and often way too obviously so. But the pieces float around without jelling together. Again these pieces were 30% gem and 70% ridiculous silliness. The two main characters (all the supporting figures were so sketchy that they were barely shadows) did not come to life after all, despite the occasional flashes of brilliant observations.

The language is precise---not unlike Eileen Chang in some sense---but short and very accessible. Just sophisticated enough for the vanity of academic critics and just digestible enough for the palate of the average reader. No wonder his novels have become best sellers.

Playing with the concept of time, especially its elasticity in fiction. Sure. Whatever. Blah blah blah. The ending is not a clever exploration of time but is just stupid. Hinting at class separation and conflicts that are represented in sexual disruptions. Yeah, yeah, yeah, we've all been there and done that with far more brutal honesty over half a century ago. And oh the horror of innocence, the evil of naivete, the danger of ignorance. Boo hoo.

What's worst for me about the book is the fractured character study that never convinced and the carefully hidden emotional manipulation and coldness on the author's part.

I guess one can always argue that the unsatisfying details, the inconsistency in the characters, the silliness and emptiness, and the lack of believability of On Chesil Beach are not flaws but sophisticated, deep, superior modernist metafiction techniques and themes blah blah blah, as the New York Times review has praised:

http://www.nytimes.com/2007/06/03/books ... hem-t.html

The review just convinces me that I would be even less inclined to read Mr. Lethem's novel than I am to read another McEwan. Thanks but no thanks.
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Post by putaopi » 2008-12-29 23:21

"The groom, Edward, was from a country family of the lower class with a healthy sexual appetite and physical attraction to his new wife. The bride, Florence, came out of an upper class Oxford family and was a classically trained musician;"

听起来男女主角的设定和<Atonement>差不多。很多粉丝对电影强烈不满,我看过电影翻翻小说,倒觉得电影拍得真不错。 小说有点儿让人看不下去,不知道为什么。

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Post by barb » 2008-12-30 3:31

被你一说我才发现读On Chesil Beach那点似曾相识来自于张奶奶。

我和你正相反,读完它后才决定去看Atonement的小说,电影太烂了――除了Vanessa Redgrave那段儿。

我对On Chesil Beach最腹诽的地方一是男女描写的不平衡,显然他对女主角这类人知之甚少,揣测多于写实;二是跟电视剧一样,有天大的误会,三两句话的事儿,偏偏憋死也不说(这难道不是畅销的原因之一)。但有没有仇视女性这么严重,待我从Atonement和Saturday慢慢看来。我有恶趣味,我很享受它钻进针尖儿里的描写,和结构上不乏阴谋的苦心铺陈(像个技术员!)。

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Post by Jun » 2008-12-30 10:16

苦心铺陈
就是这个问题!细节和闪回都是目的性太强了,全部是为了解释结尾高潮的"转折点",但是拼在一起却并没有写出完整的两个人。到头来他们也只是两个片面的平面的形象,感觉就是生存在这个故事里的,在情节的框框之外并不存在。

Too much cleverness. Not the kind of writers I like to befriend.
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Post by barb » 2008-12-30 19:01

那强烈推荐你看David Lodge的campus trilogy:
Changing Places
Small World
Nice Work

结构上也是苦心铺陈,却是出于评论家对小说家善意的嘲笑,也光明得多,不像McEwan那么阴鸷。是大智慧不是小聪明 ;)

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Post by simonsun » 2008-12-31 9:26

Chesil Beach的结尾确实太傻了。

不过,张爱玲的《第二炉香》怎么说?
Violent delights.

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Post by Jun » 2008-12-31 10:46

第二炉香我也想到了,张爱玲很明智地保持纯外人的眼光,写的是短篇,用的是猎奇 gossip 的口吻。而不是 McEwan 那样,又要细细描述当事人的心理,又躲着藏着不肯揭穿 Florence 的"秘密史",神秘兮兮的,效果适得其反,两头不着边。
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