[原创小说] 花边婚

tiffany · Post by **tiffany** » 2005-12-09 10:42

this one? Linda?

Knowing · Post by **Knowing** » 2005-12-09 11:05

跟没完似的，抗议，要求扩写，加长，增容！

lindamm · Post by **lindamm** » 2005-12-09 11:39

太好了,赶紧补课去

就是这个, 谢谢tiffany.

本来想要用

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偶迅速的把看完了剩下的部分, 还是没明白怎么就这样结尾了.

silkworm · Post by **silkworm** » 2005-12-09 11:47

白金成功地转移了lindamm的视线。

朝露 · Post by 朝露 » 2005-12-14 19:57

哇。。。长久不来看了这啥结尾？

不过，或许helen的结尾更具现实的讥讽意味？

我身边倒有些中年男子闹花差差的，不过，多半他们的太太一幅不知情的模样，日子也就这些相敬如宾地过下去
嘿嘿

helenClaire wrote:永不离婚的

helenClaire · Post by **helenClaire** » 2005-12-15 15:21

朝露 wrote: 哇。。。长久不来看了这啥结尾？

接受大家的批评，尤其是朝露的批评。

写的时候贪好玩，过后发现笑话自己相信的东西。。。不是一件好玩的事情。非常后悔。
我一般没有勇气回头读，你们就当我没写过好了。

Jun · Post by **Jun** » 2005-12-15 15:27

Come on, Helen. No one has written the perfect story. If we all want to write the perfect story every time, there won't be any story written.

My aspiration is to write so-so, average stories that are mildly entertaining. This story of yours has far exceeded my standards...

helenClaire · Post by **helenClaire** » 2005-12-15 15:40

Jun wrote:Come on, Helen. No one has written the perfect story.

Jun my dear friend, the ending is not what bothers me.
I regret that I've ever written such a story. It's with bad motivation and bad attitute, it's just wrong. I feel a little ashamed of myself.

朝露 · Post by 朝露 » 2005-12-21 19:40

helenClaire wrote:接受大家的批评，尤其是朝露的批评。

亲爱的helen啊，我那话不过是我正看的热辣辣的时候忽然嘎然而止。。。意犹未尽的牢骚啊

helenClaire wrote:
I regret that I've ever written such a story. It's with bad motivation and bad attitute, it's just wrong. I feel a little ashamed of myself.

嗯。。。这话说得

我爱看你的故事是因为你不急不慢地娓娓道出一个个精彩的故事来，娱乐、满足了我一颗读者的心了

而以我一个读者的角度，一个小说的好坏不是取决于故事里的人物是charming的，或者怎么的

不好的生存态度你便不写它、我看不到它，它依然是在的，写了倒让我这种看的人琢磨琢磨，未尝不是件警世的事

以我看倒要越发地谢你啦